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PREMISE
A premise is a short statement that makes an immediate value
judgment on your characters. This judgment may not be true, in fact
your story may even prove the premise to be false. The purpose of
the premise is to clearly state that one of your characters has
taken an emotional stand which he/she will fight to protect.
The premise can be dissected into three parts, character,
action and outcome. Here are some samples:
CHARACTER ACTION OUTCOME
Bitterness leads to false gaiety
Foolish generosity leads to poverty
Honesty defeats duplicity
Heedlessness destroys friendship
Ill-temper leads to isolation
Materialism conquers mysticism
Prudishness leads to frustration
For those of you familiar with my medieval quintet, here are
the premises I used for those books. You'll see that these very
basic idea/statements were reflected in every aspect of each story
through both main and secondary characters and even physically
played out within the confines of the setting.
Winter's Heat—Intimacy
destroys emotional barriers
Summer's Storm—Deception leads
to exposure
Spring's Fury—Acceptance
brings happiness
Autumn's Flame—Need destroys
false self-sufficiency
A Love for All Seasons—Hunger
exposes deception
HOW A PREMISE WORKS ON YOUR CHARACTERS
Only one main character in your story must be changed through
the action of a premise; both can be but one must be.
However, the second main character will reflect the emotional value
of the premise and be lead to the same outcome in a less dramatic
way.
Example: Gone with the Wind
Premise: Frustrated love
destroys selfishness
Selfish Scarlett loves Ashley although she knows he is
devoted to Melanie. No matter what Scarlett does, she cannot
convince Ashley that she is the better woman. Upon Melanie's death
Scarlett runs to Ashley fully expecting him to fall into her arms at
long last, only to be rebuffed. Her selfishness prevents her from
seeing that Ashley cannot love her.
Equally selfish Rhett is hopelessly in love with Scarlett. No
matter what he does, he cannot break through her obsession with
Ashley. Not even marriage brings the love he so desires. Only after
their daughter dies does he finally understand Scarlett isn't
capable of returning his love. As he recognizes this, he's changed;
his selfishness is destroyed, along with his obsession with Scarlett.
WHAT TO LOOK FOR WHEN EXTRACTING A PREMISE
Romeo and Juliet: The tale of a love so great, it
caused both characters to defy their families' tradition of hate and
throw away life to unite in death.
Premise: Great love defies even death
King Lear: He is a vain man whose oldest daughters'
flattery causes him to blindly trust them. But, flattery cannot be
trusted. Those who do so are often led to destruction and ruin.
Premise: Blind trust leads to destruction |
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